使句子多样化的雅思写作技巧

  一篇好文章的条件很多。除了内容丰富和组织紧密之外,词汇的运用和句子的.处理,也起着决定性作用。

使句子多样化的雅思写作技巧

  句子可长可短,同一件事,可以用不同的句式表达。如果句子清一色是简单句,文章必定很单调乏味。如果全篇充满了冗长的复杂句,读起来也很费力。最好的方法是以简单句为基础,配合适当的并列句和复杂句。简单句可长可短,通常要加些附属成分,如分词短语、介词短语、副词短语、不定式动词短语,以及节缩成分。

  总之,作者可根据情况,使句子多样化,使文章灵活多姿。例如下列五个句子的基本概念一样,但是句式不同,内容重点也有些差别:

  (1)Thegoatsgrazedpeacefullyinthefarmandwereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(并列分句(1)+2)

  (2)Grazingpeacefully,thegoatsinthefarmwereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(现在分语短语+简单句)

  (3)Inthefarm,thegoatsgrazedpeacefullyandwereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(副词短语+并列分句(1)-(2))

  (4)Thereweregoatsgrazingpeacefullyinthefarm,unawareoftheapproachinghunter.(简单句+形容语短语)

  (5)Asthegoatsgrazedpeacefullyinthefarm,theywereunawareoftheapproachinghunter.(原因副词从句+主句)

  (1)和(5)的句式最常见;如果加上其他三种互相交替,句子不是更多样化吗?

  最后,看看这两个句子要如何多样化呢?

  (6)Theyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining.

  (7)Hefeltveryuneasy.

  (a)Theyoungpilotonhisfirstoverseastrainingfeltveryuneasy.

  (b)Theyoungpilotfeltveryuneasyduringhisfirstoverseastraining.

  (c)Theyoungpilot’’’’’’’’sfirstoverseastrainingmadehimfeelveryuneasy.

  (d)Extremeuneasinessseizedtheyoungpilotonhisfirstoverseastraining.

  (e)Theyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining,feelingveryuneasy.

  (f)Itbeinghisfirstoverseastraining,theyoungpilotfeltveryuneasy.

  (g)Beingonhisfirstoverseastraining,theyoungpilotfeltveryuneasy.

  (h)Theyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastrainingandfeltveryuneasy.

  (i)Theyoungpilot,whowasonhisfirstoverseastraining,feltveryuneasy.

  (j)Whentheyoungpilotwasonhis/firstoverseastrainging,hefeltveryuneasy.

  (k)Astheyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining,hefeltveryuneasy.

  (l)Theyoungpilotwasonhisfirstoverseastraining,sothathefeltveryuneasy.

  在上述12个句子中,(a)-(g)是简单句;(h)是并列句;(i)-(l)是复杂句。简单句除(b)和(g)之外,其他五样,用的人并不多。人们最喜欢采用复杂句,尤其是(j)和(k)这两款;接着便是并列句(h)。如果大多数人的句子只限于(b),(g),(h),(j)和(k)这五种,而其他的则弃如敝屣,不是很可惜吗?